Linda Robertson
Vicious Circle (Persephone Alcmedi, Book 1)
Simon & Schuster Pocket Juno (US & CA: 30th June 2009; Date; AU: 17th August 2009)
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Persephone Alcmedi is by no means a professional assassin, but she did kill a guy once. Now her secret is no longer safe, and a High Priestess offers to pay Seph mucho moolah to kill Goliath Kane. Who’s a vampire. However, vampire-wizard Menessos is more dangerous, and if he’s going to die, Seph’s going down with him.
A friend in need is a friend indeed, and now Seph’s gone from a quiet home to sharing with six others. Sometimes more. Witches, wærewolves and vampires don’t seem a gratuitous number at first, but as Seph gains more power, she edges closer to Mary Sue territory – and being a “chosen one” of sorts (Lustrata) only confirms that. Beverley is a precocious child, and grandmother Demeter…well, similarities to Janet Evanovich’s character Grandma Mazur are inevitable. While Demeter may be here for comic relief and occasional knowledge, I don’t quite feel that she’s believable or realistic. On the other hand, my grandmothers have a lot more health problems, so I don’t really have another elderly female with whom to compare her.
Then there’s the sub-plot involving Seph’s friends from…high school or college; I don’t remember. One of them’s found religion, which makes things awkward for everyone else. Actually, this sub-plot doesn’t seem to have anything to do with the main plot, and thus could/should have been deleted. Unless Nancy plays a major part in the next book.
The group shares a great rapport, which makes their friendship believable, but my favourite character far and beyond is Amenemhab, a jackal who delivers wisdom during Seph’s meditations. The novel is enjoyable enough, but I was never really in a rush to get back to it, though likely the Melbourne heatwave has robbed me of enthusiasm. I’m still interested in reading Hallowed Circle and Fatal Circle, though.